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I stood peering into my bedroom, observing the things around me. I didn’t get much chance to do this – always busy! You must be able to relate to that feeling.

In front of me was my bed. Above is a beautiful painting that my Grandma had given me. She is a talented woman. It was painted using oil paints of a landscape with warm colours blended intricately. It had me pondering when I had received this, how a woman could be so gifted when at one point she would never have been recognised or accepted in the art world because of her gender. I went to see my Grandma Tuesday; she was telling me what it was like when she was growing up.

I laid on the bed, after a long day at Uni the last thing I felt like doing was picking the clothes up off the floor. Next to my bed is my dressing table. It is shocking how much time girls spend getting ready. The amount of make-up and fake tan that is sprawled out is ridiculous. I’d feel naked without it, and really conscious that someone would be looking at me. It reminds me of a book I read called: The Beauty Myth by Naomi Wolf. It’s about how images of beauty are used against women. Grandma said they never had to bother wearing make-up.

I reached over to get the T.V remote.  I turned it on to the music channels. We take having a television in the house for granted; my Grandma never had one growing up. I listen to R&B and watch T.V a lot; I think I’d feel lost without it although she did say that they used to entertain themselves. I got up and started to dance pretending the remote was my microphone. One thing that I hate about T.V today; is the women that are half-naked and perceived to be beautiful. Maybe it’s the media that’s done this to women?

Feeling thirsty, I grabbed the can of Coke off my bedside table, still swaying to the end of the song when I spilt the coke on the rug! I quickly grabbed the nearest top and tried to rub it out of the carpet, I was failing though! I gave up and just sat there. Now it’s ruined! Probably better used as a doormat now! Thinking about that, it reminded me of what happened today. Anya, one of my friends is such a gorgeous girl, lovely tall legs and dazzling smile – any woman would love to look like her. She’s been seeing this guy on and off for the past two years. She was upset this morning; he had told her that she was a pathetic, weak, doormat. I have no idea how he thinks he can treat her like this; he’s made her feel like she tiny and worthless. Fuck him! – look where she is, at University obtaining a degree! Men like that just make me angry! Anyway I’m getting tired, suppose I will have to catch up later…







'Diary from an Ordinary Girl' 2012

I stood peering into my bedroom, with my clothes tangled at my feet; observing the things around me. I didn’t get much chance to do this – always busy! You must be able to relate to that feeling.

In front of me is my single bed, with a striking pink bed cover. Above is a beautiful painting that my Grandma had given me. She is a very talented woman. It was painted using oil paints of a landscape with warm colours blended together intricately. It had me pondering when I had received this, how a woman could be so gifted when at one point she would never have been recognised or accepted in the art world because of her gender. I went to see my Grandma yesterday; I was fascinated as she was telling me what it was like when she was growing up during the 1950s.

I lay on the bed and stared around. After a long day at Uni the last thing I felt like doing was picking up the clothes off the floor. To the right of my bed is my dressing table. It is shocking how much girls spend getting ready. The amount of make-up, fake tan, fake eyelashes that are sprawled out on my dressing table is ridiculous. I’d feel naked if I went out without it though and really conscious that someone will be looking at me. It reminds me of a book I read a while back called: The Beauty Myth by Naomi Wolf. It’s about how Images of beauty are used against women. I guess I’ll never understand why. Grandma said they didn’t have to bother wearing a full face of make-up when she was my age, although she did use vinegar to make her hair shiny – I will have to try this to see if it works!

I reach over to grab the Television Remote.  Turn it on, to see it’s already on the music channels. Again I am reminded about what my Grandma was saying. We take having a television in the house for granted; my Grandma never had one growing up. I listen to R&B and watch T.V a lot; I think I’d feel lost without it although she did say that they used to entertain themselves. She even read Shakespeare’s books, to keep occupied. I remember having to read them through secondary school - I could never understand them. I get up and start to dance pretending the remote is my microphone. There is one thing that I hate about T.V and music videos today is the women back up dancers that are wearing next to nothing with cleavage and everything on show. Now that’s answered my thoughts from earlier as to why women feel under pressure to look their best these days, when this is plastered on the T.V.

Feeling thirsty, I grasp the can of Diet Coke off my bedside table, still swaying to the end of the song, in my own little world, as the coke accidently spills onto the rug!... I quickly grab the nearest already worn top and try and rub it out of the carpet, looks like I’m failing though! I give up and just sit on the rug. Now it’s ruined, I suppose I could use it as a doormat now. Having just thought that it recapped my memory of what happened today. Anya, one of my close friends is such a gorgeous girl, lovely tall legs and dazzling smile – any woman would dream to look like her. She has been seeing this guy on and off for the past two years. She was very upset this morning she said he told her that she was a pathetic, weak, doormat. Although I don’t see anyone else walking all over her apart from him! I have no idea how he thinks he can treat her like this and get away with it, he’s made her feel like she is so tiny and not worthy. I would say fuck him – look where she is – at University obtaining a degree and has a great life ahead of her. Men like that just make me angry – she doesn’t need someone bringing her down like that!!

I get up and open the window for some fresh air. I am unbearably tired, suppose I will have to catch up later…






'A diary from an Ordinary Girl' 2012 (Draft)


I was stood peering into my bedroom, with my clothes tangled at my feet; observing the things around me. I don’t get much chance to do this – always busy and things to do! You must be able to relate to that feeling.
In front of me is my single bed, with a striking pink bed cover. It’s just big enough for myself but that is all I need. Above the bed is a beautiful painting that my Grandma had given me. She is a very talented, lovely woman. It was painted using oil paints, with warm, creamy colours blended together intricately, with lots of texture applied to the painting. It was of a peaceful landscape not far from here. Must have been an early autumn’s day, as the leaves in the foreground are a lovely vibrant golden brown. It had me pondering when I had received this, how a woman could be so gifted when at one point she would never have been recognised or accepted in the art world because of her gender.


I lay on the bed. Just stared around for a bit. After a long day at University the last thing I felt like doing was picking up the clothes off the floor, or even attempting to create some kind of order and organization in the room. I can smell the margarita pizza cooking in the oven drifting up the stairs, whilst my belly starts rumbling.


To the right of my bed is my dressing table. It shocking how much girls my age today spend getting ready – well guys probably do to. But the amount of make-up, fake tan, fake eyelashes that are sprawled out on the table is ridiculous. It reminds me of a book I read a while back called: The Beauty Myth by Naomi Wolf. It’s about how Images of beauty are used against women. I guess I’ll never understand why.


I reach over to grab the Television Remote.  Turn it on, to see it’s already on the music channels. Number One in the top 40 this week and I love it, been listening to this song all day. I listen to R&B on a regular basis. I get up and start to dance pretending the remote is my microphone. There is one thing that baffles me is the women dancing half naked in the music video, it really does spoil the song, I best invest in an Ipod that way I wouldn’t have to see this. Now that’s answered my thoughts from earlier as to why women feel under pressure to look their best, when this is plastered on the T.V.


Feeling thirsty, I grasp the can of Diet Coke off my bedside table, still swaying to the end of the song, in my own little world. I then accidently spill it on my new rug! Nooo... I quickly grab the nearest already worn top and try and rub it out of the carpet, looks like I’m failing though! I give up and just sit on the rug. I do love that rug and now it’s ruined, I suppose I could use it as a doormat now, if it’s no use in here. Having just thought that it recapped my memory of what happened today. Anya, one of my close friends is such a gorgeous girl, lovely tall legs and dazzling smile – any woman would dream to look like her. She has been seeing this guy on and off for the past two years. I wouldn’t say he was right for her, always messing her around, one minute wanting her and the next not. He’s the type of dominating guy that can’t decide what he wants, although if he doesn’t want her than no other can have her. She was very upset this morning she said he told her that she was a pathetic, weak, doormat that needed to grow a back bone. I have no idea how he thinks he can treat her like this and get away with it, he’s made her feel like she is so tiny and not worthy. I would say fuck him – look where she is – at University obtaining a degree and has a great life ahead of her. Grr.. Men like that make me angry!!


Oh God – The smoke alarm is going off now! – I think my pizza must be ready! Haha… I get up and rush out the door, slamming the door behind me. 

'Daughter's Bedroom' 2012 (Draft)


9.30pm and Lauren was still not home from dancing. Lauren had been attending dance classes and performing in shows since she was four years old. I had signed her up at stagecoach where she would learn to sing, dance and act. I thought that it would be a good idea to help her gain more confidence. I remember picking her up after her lessons had finished, always such a happy child, her gorgeous smile, with lovely long red hair that almost reached her hips; she giggled away showing me what she had learnt that lesson – she loved it. Back then I never knew what damage it would have brought her fifteen years later.


I often come to sit in her room while she it out.  I will lie on the bed staring around, reminiscing the days when she was a child. I had been living in this house since 3 months after I found out I was pregnant with Lauren. I never knew back then what it would be like being a single mum.  The stares, the snide remarks and the constant questions on who that father was. I always felt as though they saw me as a whore and a slut who didn’t have a clue who the father was – but of course I did – He just chose to not have anything to do with her however, he’s the one that has missed out.


We proved everyone wrong… we was a team, it was always me and her. I didn’t want to burden her with the emotional baggage of the highs and lows of an unhappy relationship. It would just be the two of us and a supporting cast of extended family. I did find it hard to get a job. I applied for anything going: café, bar, retail work.  I suppose I will never know if they discriminated me for being a single mum. I did eventually find a job; it was in a little coffee shop, just up the high street. I did enjoy it there and it did just bring in that extra bit of money.

I get up to peer out the window. Still no sign of her, walking up the road. I sigh. I then sit at her dressing table, pick her brush up and start brushing my hair staring at my own reflection looking back at me.  Looking at Lauren I can see the resemblance of me, same hair, same eyes…

You’re probably thinking why I feel so apprehensive, worrying where she is. After all she is a nineteen year old, young woman.  It all started 3 years previously, after turning 16 she moved dance school for young adults. She started coming home and refusing to eat her dinner. At first I didn’t see this as a problem. Until I noticed it had got progressively worse, I started finding mouldy, stinking food stuffed under her bed. I had noticed when her friends came round that they were also so tiny, their faces even looked so drained. I once confronted her about this but she just got angry and snapped at me. Apparently you have to look like this to be a professional dancer.  I was just worried about her health.



The phone rings, I sit as my heart sinks, I then rush to the phone...